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写作亮点的体现方法

线话英语|2014-06-03 08:32:56
 在写作的时候。我们都是有自己设下的亮点。但是亮点如果不能凸显的话。我们的 文章就会让人感觉平淡无奇,不能吸引别人的眼球,当然也就不能得到好的成绩,所以今天我们就总结一下写作亮点的体现方法。

一、适当运用非谓语结构

非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如:

1. When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.

Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.

听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。

2. As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.

由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。

3. As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.

他出生农民家庭,只上过两年学。

 

二、避免重复使用同一词语

为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到喜欢二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如:

1. I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

三、合理使用省略句

合理恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如:

1. He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?

He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?

他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?

2. If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.

If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.

如果天气好,我们就去;如果天气不好,我们就不去了。

3. She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.

She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.

她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。

四、灵活改变句子开头

在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为主语+谓语+宾语,即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如使用倒状语或以状语开头等,会使文章增强表现力。如:

1. There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.

At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.

在小山顶上有一座古庙。

2. You can do it well only in this way.

Only in this way can you do it well.

只有这样你才能把它做好。

3. A young woman sat by the window.

By the window sat a young woman.

窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。

4. The door opened and Mr Smith came in.

The door opened and in came Mr Smith.

门开了,史密斯先生走了进来。

写好一篇英语文章,不能只靠枯燥的词汇,也要注意文章内容的设计,希望大家在写作的过程中能够提高的更多。

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