高考作文之：如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点”2

　　3. 通过分句跟合句,增强句子的连贯性跟表现力。例如: 内容来自

　　(原文) He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

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　　(修正) He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

　　(原文) We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

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　　(修改) After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing. CopyRight yingyuzhijia,英语书面语.com

　　4. 注意衔接词与句子的应用。

　　以2001年高考作文为例,在信的开头,可加上“You want to know something about what is going on in schools in China?”这句话起承上启下的作用,使文章过渡自然;再如,用“What was worse?”引出,晚上还要做作业,就寝时间11:30等要点。又如,“Now I have more free time...” 可引出减负后的情况。另外,在信的结尾,可用“How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.”来自然地结束这封信。

　　5. 利用过渡词语。

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　　写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。那么,如何使文章行文连贯呢?这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语,过渡性词语就像是咱们组装机械时应用的光滑剂一样,起着润滑的作用。常用的过渡词语主要有:

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　　并列递进:and, also, as well as, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, etc. 内容来自

　　转折:but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc.

　　因果:because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc.

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　　对比:or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc.

　　总结:in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc. 本文来自：英语之家

　　总之,要使文章的品位高,可读性强,考生应增加些较高级的词汇与复杂的结构,并运用恰当的连接词和复合句,只有这样,才华在考试中取得理想的成绩。