英语作文技巧范文解析

　　写作应当是一件美妙的事件，也是一件快乐的事件。它的美好和快活来自一种经典的美，那就是朴素。同时，很多企业和培训机构介绍了许多英语作文技巧，然而，雅思培训的逐渐商业化和考生日益的功利心态，以及双方的彼此作用，使得各种雅思英语作文技巧冲刺整套辅导书。这也让很多考试难以选择和记忆。

我们先来看剑七上第一篇雅思考题和考官的文章：

TEST 1 WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

Write about the following topic:

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

You should write at least 250 words.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

MODEL ANSWER

The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.

Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, art or music. So from our own school experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that a child can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.

However, some people believe that innate talent is what differentiates a person who has been trained to play a sport or an instrument, from those who become good players. In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique, and this extra talent cannot be taught, no matter how good the teacher or how frequently a child practices.

I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes. Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive. Good musicians or artists and exceptional sports stars have probably succeeded because of both good training and natural talent. Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.

In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.

这篇文章共281 字，满足250个字以上的基本字数要求。我们要学习英语作文技巧，就需要先对文章进行分析。下面，我们需要分别从结构、内容和评分标准本身来分析这篇文章。

第一，从结构上考虑：

由于这篇文章的题型是Discuss，即探讨，因此，文章分四个部分：首段引入话题，旁边段第一段讨论第一种说法，旁边段第二段讨论第二种说法。最后一部分由两段组成，一段表白本人的观点，另外一段总结自己的观点。文章结构是合乎这种题型的。考生也应该就此举一反三，演绎从剑三到剑七上其他考官写过的文章的结构，找出自己应答其余三种主流题型的固定分段方法。其余三种题型辨别为“表态加论述”，“比较优弊病（有outweigh跟无outweigh）”“问题起因措施”。 内容来自

第二，从内容上来看，文章所波及的话题为教育，是最高频的雅思写作话题。笔者将此文翻译如下（大部分为直译，可供考生作进行中翻英以及写长难句训练资料。这种方式能使雅思考生懂得雅思写作风格，熟悉常用表白，总结高分句型和发现语法错误，堪称一举多得）：

当人们试图阐明不同程度的（比方说）在体育、艺术或音乐方面的才干时，天赋和培训两者的相对重要性是一个经常拿来讨论的话题。

显然，很多教导系统都基于这样一种信仰—所有的孩子都能被有效地训练以获得不同的技巧，这里也包含那些和体育、艺术或音乐相关的技巧。因而，从咱们读书的阅从来看，我们能找到许多证据来证明这样一个观点---任何一个孩子都能从持续的教养跟引导性的练习中得到这些技能。

然而，一些人信赖天生的才华就是能使那些通过训练才能进行体育活动或弹奏乐器的人和那些（自身）成为优秀运动员（或乐器弹奏者）的人区分开来的东西。 换句话说，这里更主要的是能力而不是所学的技巧，并且这种特别的禀赋是不能被传授的，不论老师有如许优良或者孩子进行如许频繁的操练。

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我个人认为有些人确实有着可能是从他们基因里遗传下来的天赋。这些天赋能帮助这些个体把持一定技巧，使得他们当先于其别人；而那些更加努力的学生却无奈达到可能平起平坐的高度。但是，跟所有波及天赋还是教诲（能成才）的其他问题一样，这两者并不是相互排挤的。优秀的音乐家或艺术家以及技能超群的体育明星所取得的胜利应不仅归功于好的训练，也同时是天赋的作用。没有天赋，长期训练将会既没吸引力也没什么结果，而不训练，孩子是无法学习如何开发和发展他们得天赋的。

综上所述，我同意任何孩子都能被传授特定技巧的观点，然而要在音乐，艺术和体育等范围中超群绝伦，一些自然天赋不可或缺。

雅思写作第一项评分标准是Task Response，它详细包括三部分：

1) how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task

这里的重点是 “all parts of the task”，很多考生不理解。实在，也就是说每个题设当中的动词 “discuss both sides” 和 “give your own opinion” 考生是否都以不同的段落实现。很明显，考官的文章无懈可击，我们已经在第一局部的构造探讨中剖析过这个问题了。详见上文。

2) the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported.

这里的重点是 “relevant”,“develop”,以及 “support”。我们首先来看 “relevant”，即文章有没有跑题，或者是否文章里面有废话可以被去掉，考生可以对照上文的中英双文仔细观察，没有一句话不是和主题相干的。所以“相关性”考官的范文做到了。而你自己写的文章呢？其次是 “develop”，观点有发展就必定不能原地踏步，而是有新的批驳性思维和深入的观察。考官的范文充分地体现了这一点：在从事情两方面的分辨讨论，始终到事情双方的逻辑关系，考官把握得十分到位。 请大家仔细阅读文章第四段，细心体会这种思维的递进和发展。最后是 “support”，请大家浏览以下文字，具体领会句子之间总分关系（第一句“总”，而二三句“分”），即这里的支撑和被支持的逻辑关联： 内容来自

“这两者并不是彼此排斥的。精良的音乐家或艺术家以及技能超群的体育明星所取得的成功应不仅归功于好的训练，也同时是天赋的作用。没有天赋，长期训练将会既没吸引力也没什么成果，而不训练，孩子是无奈学习如何开发和发展他们得天赋的。”

3) the extent to which the candidate's position is clear and effective

这里的重点是 “clear”和“effective”。考官的这篇文章思路是如何做到既想得明白又交代得清楚的？其实很简略。文章所有的句子能够分为两类，一类是别人的观点，一类是自己的观点。要晓得，这一项评分标准中的position是指的自己的中心观点。所以把后一类控制清楚就可以了。作者的观点在原文中保持一致，第一，强调天赋的是先天的：I personally think that some people do have talents that are probably inherited via their genes；第二，强调天赋和训练都重要But, as with all questions of nature versus nurture, they are not mutually exclusive；最后得到自己的论断，所有的孩子都可以接受训练，然而成就往往还须要一点天赋：any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required。这一二三点的一致性和层层递进是极其周到的逻辑。关键是，这三句话到达了在这层层递进中体现了一致性的成果，语言非常高效。切实是难得的范文。 内容来自

第二项评分尺度是Coherence and Cohesion，它具体包括两个部门：

1) how well the information and ideas are organised and presented, including paragraphing

2) how well the information is linked

语言的连接包括两个：一个是句子和句子的衔接，另外一个是段和段的衔接。前者衔接方法有利用代词，重复关键词，排比句，同意转述和连接词。后者分为三种不同逻辑关系：并列，递进和转折。文章中均有体现。笔者就不在此赘述了。

第三项评分标准是Lexical Resource，它详细包括三个部分：

1) the range of vocabulary used

2) how accurately it is used

3) how appropriate it is for the task

小词：Obviously, However, including, allow, via, while, do, give, extra, as

大词：frequent, differentiate, inherit, facility, comparable, exceptional, continuous 内容来自

词组：are based on, associated with, plenty of, be inherited via, mutually exclusive

地道抒发：The relative importance, this extra talent, allow them to excel, nature versus nurture

同义转述：children, a child, a person, individuals, students, any child

第四项评分标准是Grammatical Range and Accuracy ：

1) the range of structures used

2) how accurately they are used

3) how appropriate they are for the task

考官的语言功底深厚，250字尽显语言的风采。句式多变革，详细如下：

简单句：they are not mutually exclusive.

并列句：Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent.

复合句：Such talents can give individuals a facility for certain skills that allow them to excel, while more hard-working students never manage to reach a comparable level. 本文来自：英语之家

“There be”句型：there is more to the skill than a learned technique

比拟句：In other words, there is more to the skill than a learned technique

长句：The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sport, art or music.

In conclusion, I agree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good in areas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required.

短句：they are not mutually exclusive.

下面这篇同样出自雅思考官的手。渴望雅思考生能按照第一篇文章的英语作文技巧来自行分析这第二篇文章。方法温顺序同上。要知道，做基础的文字分析也是扎实的训练语感和文字功底的方法。

TEST 3 WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

本文来自：英语之家

Write about the following topic:

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being.

What factors contribute to job satisfaction?

How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

You should write at least 250 words.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

MODEL ANSER

Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feelings about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.

Employees get job satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback from superiors is very important in his respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when someone feels they are improving or developing their skills through training opportunities, for example, then there is a sense of progress and purpose that rewards a worker. They are improving or developing their skills. The sense of belonging to a team or a working community also contributes to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and the loyal to a team. 本文来自：英语之家

Of course not everyone enjoys their work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labour relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.

However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.

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    综上所述，变的是文字，不变的评分标准。以不变应万变，既是天赋，又需技巧。咱们一起共勉。祝大家取得好成绩。

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