高中英语作文句型易错点

　  有些同在高中英语作文考试中往往会在语言方面疏漏多多，那样即便你的思路跟论证属于一流，最多也只能得个二流分数。小编为你整理托福写作中的四个语法过错，望引起大家的注意。

　　1.高中英语作文句型易错点： 用词不当

　　原：The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.

　　改：The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.

　　评：groupwork是“分组”或者“小组群体任务”的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队配合”，却用了一个看起来很像，但实际完全不同的词，表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。

　　原：You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture. 本文来自：英语之家

　　改：You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.

　　评：dangerous表现所修饰的对象是“带来危险的，有危险性的”，而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢?

　　原：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development. 内容来自

　　改：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.

　　评：模样长得像，意思可不同了。这里想用动词affect表示“影响”，却误写为名词effect“成果”，一字千里啊!

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　　2. 高中英语作文句型易错点：搭配错误 本文来自：英语之家

　　原：Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent. 内容来自

　　改：Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence. 内容来自

　　评：这位同学显然记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法，写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。

　　原：Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.

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　　改：Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.

　　评：此处是一个明显的动宾搭配弊病。“提高……技巧”应该是improve the skills，而不是increase the skills.

　　3.高中英语作文句型易错点：词性错位

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　　原：I will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study.

　　改：I will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study.

　　评：sad是形容词，而这里明显须要一个名词，应当是sadness。

　　原：Although making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.

　　改： …, spending time with the family is equally significant.

　　评：形容词significant前需要用副词来润饰，所以equal应该改成equally。

　　4.高中英语作文句型易错点： 时态混乱

　　原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

　　改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

　　评：从前时的句子中冒出了当初时，同窗你太粗心了，要仔细检查哦~

　　原：I would explain my view in the following paragraphs. 本文来自：英语之家

　　改：I’d like to explain… / I will explain… 内容来自

　　评：可能是两种说法记混了吧，结果把时态搞错了……

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