小学六年级英语作文点评

（一）

My rabbits
    I have two lovely rabbits. Each of them has got a round head,round eyes,long ears, short legs and a small tail.
    One is white, and the other is brown. They like to eat vegetables, and they like to eat the food on my hands. We are good friends. I love my rabbits. 

 六（3）代同学
郭老师对这篇小学六年级英语作文点评：短短的多少句描述，就把两只可恶活泼的小兔展现在咱们面前。渴望代昂同学能快马加鞭，写出更好的文章来。 内容来自

（二）

My father
    My father is forty-three years old. He is a teacher. He works very hard. He always wears a yellow coat and a pair of blue trousers. He like doing sports and he likes basketball best.
    My father loves me very much. He cheeks my homework every day. He often buys delicious food for me. On weekends we often go to the park with my mother. I love my father.

六（4）祖同学

郭老师点评：祖同学的这篇小学六年级英语作文熟练利用了个别当初时态中的第三人称单数用法，行文流畅，字里行间流露出对父亲的尊敬跟喜好。

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（三）

My cat
   I like animals very much. But I like cats best. Her name is Mimi. She is very lovely. She has a small black nose and a long tail. Her legs are short. When I get home, She always wags her tail and walks up to me. When she feels hungry, she meows loudly .Now she`s very fat.
   I love my little cat very much. 本文来自：英语之家

 六（1）郭同学
郭老师点评：简洁流畅的语言向大家描写了一只讨人爱好的小猫，不失为一篇结构整齐，卷面整洁的小学六年级英语作文的典范。 本文来自：英语之家

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