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英语写作:如何让文章得高分

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一、词汇决定——别树一帜 内容来自www. .com


在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是支使用《纲要》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。 内容来自www. .com


1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

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A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

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B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

 

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分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《纲领》上不的,属于高级词汇。 内容来自www. .com


2)在周末我们做很多作业。

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A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

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B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do. CopyRight .com


剖析:B句在抒发时不使用过于直接的a lot of,而是应用了endless。endless就是由《提纲》词汇end加后缀-less变革来的。

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3)洗澡间跟厨房都很好。

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A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good. 内容来自www. .com


B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

 

 


在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得活泼。

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在造句时,“较高等词汇”如能利用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。 CopyRight .com


二、结构造句——与众不同

 

 


在造句时,既要使句子活跃,又要使其简要扼要。 CopyRight .com


1、使用与人不同的表白方法,特别是提倡攻破汉语句子构造的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。


1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

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A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s. 内容来自www. .com


B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s. CopyRight .com


大多数同窗使用了there be结构,这是对的,然而B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难能可贵的。 内容来自www. .com


2)你八月十五日的来信我今天清晨收到了。


A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

 

 


B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人运用的方式不同,简洁) 内容来自www. .com


2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感慨句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

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3)阿福救了我妹妹。


A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式) CopyRight .com


B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

 

 


4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。


A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(个别陈述句) 内容来自www. .com


B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

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3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的雷同句型,而应留心句式的变更,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较庞杂的结构如独破主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的抒发中A句简略句多,而且多处使用 there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们本人分析)。

 

 


5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子跟椅子等。 内容来自www. .com


A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

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B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

 

 


三、布局谋篇——不落窠臼


在写作中,咱们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构谨严,咱们应留神学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,NMET2002范文堪称典范。请看:


Opinions are divided on the question.


60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

 

 


On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low. 内容来自www. .com


1)该文使用Opinions are divided...作交代句,免费学英语网站,单刀直入,随后两个段落均使用了主题句(见黑体字部分),使全文结构紧凑,表白谨慎。

 

 


2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场次序作了调解,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后局部另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题凸起,条理清楚。 内容来自www. .com


3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),www. .com,这些连接手段的应用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

 

 


4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“起因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方式,。

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总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇高下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得断定的。

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