mae老师很仔细，感谢她

mae老师很仔细，感谢她

Because I was busy for my working in the day,I do not have much time to prepare and review.Richard teach me very good.but my effect of the class is not very good .

谢谢mae老师，我很喜欢她的上课方式，而且纠正我错误的表达。

感谢mae老师的仔细纠正

如果让学生多表达一点可能更好。????

今天上完课很挫败

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l think that sentence l spoke in this lesson are not good.l have to improve it quickly.By the way.could you please help me to correct following sentences of my essay it you have spare time： because the winds and the waves are getting bigger, some passengers vomited from sick. After nearly more than two hours we finally reached the world famous wonders, the place that people will always remember- the Great Barrier Reef. It is said that it is the largest coral habitat in the world., stretching over more than 2000 kilometers. Some people say that the greatest beauty lies not in the coral reefs, it`s in the undersea world. The tour guide told us about diving matters needing attention, and we changed the diving suit eager to dive into the water. Here lives the largest number of marine life. some are like beautiful dream, colorful,and some are so wonderful that they are like from the science fiction. There are more than 1500 kinds of fish, nearly 400 kinds of coral and 6 kinds of turtles, attracting countless oceanographer and biologists all over the world. It is one of the biggest Marine ecosystem, and is home for many plants and animals. Return when I had the opportunity to take a helicopter in the sky looked at the vast blue sea, my regrets thousand times we must protect the ecosystem, to protect the nature, protect the food chain, to protect the Great Barrier Reef, the human and the nature harmonious get along, in fact it is the great natural wonders of our dress is so beautiful in the world, spiritual enlightenment, need our care, is our responsibility, is the posterity expects of us. thank you!

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