摆脱累赘的英语写作技巧

      在英语写作过程中，有些技巧的把握可以让我们事半功倍。下面介绍两种英语写作技巧供大家学习。

　　英语写作技巧一：松散句记得修正

　　松散句在文章中随处可见，难以消亡。松散句在语法上并没错误，它只是太长，且搅扰读者对文章的理解，可怜的是，犯有此类弊端的作者往往难能可贵。对此可遵照一条好的准则：如果发现一个句子长及两到三行，则仔细考虑两遍，它很可能要彻底修正。

　　Rambling: The plane was ready to take off; having never traveled by plane before he suddenly felt nervous as the sky ominously turned from gray to black, and threatening bolts of lightning shot across the sky, and thunder echoed in the distance.

　　Better: The plane was ready to take off. He had never traveled by plane and suddenly felt nervous as the sky turned ominously from gray to black. Threatening bolts of lightening shot across the sky, and thunder echoed in the distance.

       英语写作技巧二：取代“and"

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　　疏松句经常有很多"and"。在书面语中，尚可多用多少个"and" 但若过多地浮现在书面英语中，则令人难以接受。取代"and"的英语写作技巧是改用逗号或从属结构，或者絮叨省略。

　　Plain: The Governor of Hong Kong descended the long and winding staircase.

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　　Interesting: The Governor of Hong Kong descended the long, winding staircase.

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     上面两点是规范和改善英语作文拖沓，累赘缺点的英语写作技巧。如果您的作文书写容易犯这两个错误，请注意不要过多使用”and“哦。

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