自考英语写作拿到高分的秘诀

　　一、防止空洞词汇

　　1. 一些空泛的单词或词组基础不能为句子带来任何相关的或重要的信息，完整可以被删掉。查看自考英语写作下面的句子：

When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.

这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：

Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.

2. 有些空洞和繁琐的抒发方式可以进行替换，例如：

Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表白方式的例子，能够调换，简化为下面的抒发方法： 内容来自

Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.

　　二： 防止反复

1. 尽量避免重复利用同样的词汇。或者有的时候固然词汇不重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。例如下面这个例子：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.

large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：

The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.

中考英语写作时应该采用这用写法：

My grandfather grew up on a large farm.

2 有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来更换，例如：

My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm。

这里的over and over again就可能改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：

My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.

　　三：抉择最适当的语法结构

决定合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表白更为正确跟简洁的自考英语写作秘诀。诚然语法的多样性也很重要，但筛选最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为主要的斟酌因素。以下准则是在考虑取舍何种语法结构时可以参考的准则：

1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应当可能反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：.

The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.

从意思上来分析，上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”，而在表达这个概念时，原句用的主语是situation，谓语动词是was，不能强调须要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：

My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.

2.避免频繁应用“there be”构造，例如下面的句子：

There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.

可以改为：

My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.

更简洁的句式为：

My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.

3.把从句改为短语或单词的自考英语写作技巧。例如：

Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.

简介的表达方式为：

The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.

4.仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才使用被动语态。例如：

In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.

本句不够简洁的起因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”，而使用了被动语态后，似乎重心变成了cows跟hay。下面的表达式是自动语态，相对来说更适合自考英语写作：

In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.

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